How does this excerpt from my novel sound?

Oooh I like the tension. A build up to a killing is always good and leaves time for the victim to escape..resulting in a creepy chase scene :D Paha..I love it. :D

Whats some birthday party invite ideas?

i'm making my own invites for my sweet sixteen party and the theme is like a letter party where the letters are my initials C and D. so basically you do stuff like play Darts or eat Cotton Candy for example. what should i do for invites?

Seriously, why is the Kardashian family so famous?

Other than Kim making sex tapes with Ray-Jay and getting loads of cosmetic surgery, why are they? I'll admit they are pretty girls but they have no talent, yet they get all this fame and publicity for doing nothing. There are so many people out there that have real talents, whether its singing, acting, art, modeling, etc Why?

When will jeter get his 3000 hit?

Hes supposed to be back with the Yankees July 4th they have a series with the Indians 3 games j think the 3 or 4 with the rays then 3 with the blue jays personally I will be at the 3rd game of the Toronto series so I hope then what's your opinion

Who is Beyonce singing about? (4 Album)?

Beyonce wrote this album to help people get through struggles in their lives. Some songs you can "hint" that she;s talking about jay. Example: Countdown "All that gossiping 10 years stop it" Beyonce and jay z been together for 10 years.

Name for a main character in a book?

I can't seem to think of a name for this character and none of the ones I come across really sim to fit him. I just need lists of names to look through until I find the perfect one. Some "maybe" names I found are Ryan, Jay and Seth and the other main character's name is Indiana. Any suggestions! Please!

Y do squirrels dart bak an forth?

Y do squirrels get halfway cross the road then change their minds wen ur drivin towards them an start dartin bak n forth makin it virtually impossible 2 keep from hittin them?